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Working Title - Spaceboy
Spaceboy is an
emotion-driven short film following the story of 7 year old Dylan who dreams of
going to space.
Dylan is a young dreamer
with a big imagination. He spends time in his room looking at the space posters
that adorn his walls and playing with the spaceship his mother gave him. Just
as boredom appears to set in, a strike of inspiration hits him and he rushes up
to grab many arts and crafts supplies, including the bottle tops off the
milk cartons (much to his mothers dismay) and a large cardboard box full of
paper, card, tinfoil and everything else needed to be creative.
His room becomes cluttered
as he excitedly creates his masterpiece, tongue stuck out in excited
concentration. It is soon revealed that Dylan is creating a space suit for
himself, which he puts on immediately and proudly stands admiring his finished
creation.
He runs around the room
playing make-believe and looks up out of his skylight at the darkening sky. He
leaves the room in a burst of energy, knocking a drawing off his desk of
himself and his "daddy the spaceman".
Dylan leaves the house
unnoticed and makes his way to the local playground. His imagination runs wild
as he spins on the roundabout, reaching the speed of light and climbs to the
top of a structure to scout locations. He finishes his space training and heads
up to the Sheffield amphitheatre that overlooks the city. As dusk approaches he
plays on staring up into the darkening skies. After a while it seems that he
has lost his energy as he sits down heavily on a bench. We see him look up
towards the sky once more before the scene fades away.
4 days previously
Dylan is sat at the TV
attentively watching the cartoon. His mother is at the sink washing dishes. A
sudden flash of blue light breaks through the curtains catching Dylan's
attention. He jumps up just as a loud knock raps of the door. Before his mother
can react Dylan runs up to door and yanks it open to reveal a tall dark figure
in a police outfit. He looks so small in comparison as he looks up to meet the
policeman's eyes. Dylan's mother quickly tells her son to go upstairs and play.
He obliges and looks back to see his mother's concerned face as she speaks to
the police officer.
Dylan is sat in his room on
his bed as his mother enters. Her face is slightly red and blotchy and it is
obvious she has been crying. She walks over and sits beside Dylan softly
explaining that Dylan's father isn't coming back home and that he is now 'with
the stars' looking down on both of them. As she strokes his head and kisses his
forehead, Dylan simply looks up at the stars outside and opens his eyes wide in
awe.
The key themes within this
short film are excitement, determination and love. We intend to portray this
through the use of set design, camera work, sound and editing. There will be a
warm colour grade to the shots, creating an uplifting and nostalgic feel. This
will be complimented with the soft and space-like soundscape, which will be
pleasant to listen to, reflecting the child-like quality to the film.
The character of Dylan will
portray a flood of emotions through close up shots of his facial expressions.
There will be focused determination as he sticks his tongue out whilst creating
his spacesuit. There will be complete excitement as he rushes around the
playground preparing for lift off. And there will also be confusion and sadness
when he hears that his father won't be returning home again.
The pace of the film will
build throughout, from the opening shots of Dylan making his suit, through to
the space training simulations. This will be achieved through quick cuts and
exciting sounds being played throughout. There will then be a dip in pace as
Dylan realises that he will not be able to really go to space and see his
father again. This will be shown through long shots, creating realism and
allowing time for the viewer to take in the situation. The ending of the film
should be both sad and uplifting, as Dylan learns of his father's absence, his
naive and innocent mind begins to wonder into the world of imagination.